I'm not really sure what I just watched, or played. The text could be a lot better, even a small little box at the bottom with dialog, with a small avatar of the person talking, instead of floating text. The story, bland, it's one that has been told more times that I have been to the toilet in my lifetime, it's generic, unoriginal, and no new twist was put on it here.
Controls were simple, but pointless, you didn't even need to include the left arrow key, just have the right arrow key! I mean, there was so much you could have done here, but didn't, you could have had more controls, you could have told us more about the person who died, you could have told us more about the person we were playing as. I did not care about any of the characters, I don't know who they are, I was not invested in them.
There is a lot of room for improvement on this one, it's very barebones.